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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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PETE
by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Joined: May 2010
Posts: 4,172 Likes: 8
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Donna,
I really appreciate al of the time you took on this.
I do believe that mentioning that she is "Fair of Face" allows for folks to "not" have to know the poem.
I also mention that no one takes the time to "get to know her", so we didn't get into that, we only know she is sad that others find her beauty intimidating.
I agree with one of the lines you noted, I think I was being lazy and letting that slide, I am changing the line in the bridge to "and lonliness has her reeling"...thanks for the heads up!!
Always happy when you lend your time Donna!!
Tammy
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