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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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This was written during the 50/90 Challenge. Just looking for any feedback on it. The bridge is troublesome...lol. Any comments or suggestions are welcome! Only a Dream Well, you’re on my mind again On a brilliant afternoon There you are lookin’ at me And I’m in a real good mood We’re like kids on the beach Running away from rushing waves You roll me up in your arms And love flies across the bay [ch] But it’s only a dream Only a wish Only a lingering hope Will I see you Will we meet again Will the sunrise leave me cold The moon brings a light to us So we dance with the crystal ball A wink for me, a kiss for you And we start our own free fall [ch] But it’s only a dream Only a wish Only a lingering hope Will I see you Will we meet again Will the sunrise leave me cold [br] Fantasies are fleeting But I keep on believing We’ll find our way And you’ll be here again someday Repeat ch ©2012 Kristi McKeever
A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write, if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be, he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist
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