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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/15/26 04:35 AM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/15/26 02:10 AM
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Lau Noah
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 02:43 PM
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Nikki ~
You're getting the "you're" and "your" mixed up! *S* But this is a very nice, simple song. I'm having a hard time with the opening though.
try and try, i do .
to make my heart, forget you .
uneasy, it's so hard to do .
baby, i just can't get over you.
hmmmm...what do you think? Not totally satisfied. I'm a little hung up on the first "forget you." I don't think it needs to be said twice in the same verse, however, so I changed line 4.
Keep it up Nikki.
Nice job!
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