I like your writing but I do agree with babyblue that your songs all seem to have the same theme. Honestly, you could combine all of your songs into one song and it would still make sense. Don't think this is a bad thing, I have many songs that share a similar theme. And if for a long period of time, I only get the inspiration to write about one theme, then that's all I do. The point of what I'm saying though is that you think about other things then what your current songs deal with, so you should attempt writing about those things as well as what you are writing about now. If you had a good day, try writing about the feeling, if someone was mean to you today or if someone was nice to you try writing about what kinds of thoughts that gives you. If you only write about one thing, you will only become good at writing about that thing. Practise writing about everything that you think, and you will become good at writing everything that you can feel or think. But good song, keep at it. You're doing very well.

Josh Packard