just wanting to see if I could get some feedback before I record this again. One time before I posted this and some didnt like the pretty thug line, but im kinda stuck on it. anwyay

The Human Spark
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She came from New York on a train
threw away her drugs...
such a pretty thug

She thumbed a ride on "21"
I thought "allright..
aint nothin but time tonight"

We traded stories for a while
but this one had me beat
she grew up in the streets

I said "let's stop and get a drink"
she shook her head "I appreciate that man...but no way"
"I appreciate that man...no way"

"I'm lookin for an Antibody Antibody
To help me fight a soul disease
I'm lookin for ya Anybody, Anybody
don't wanna lose control of me
but I'm so sick of waitin on the fading dark
tonight im seekin someone who'll provide the human spark"

"There aint no poison worth it's salt"
she whispered in my ear'
as I tried to steer

"It took me 15 years to learn...
learned it all today"
"so Mister whatcha say?
hey Mister whadiya say?"

Cause, I'm lookin for an Antibody Antibody
To help me fight a soul disease
I'm lookin for ya Anybody, Anybody
help me take control of me
Cause I'm so sick of waitin on the fading dark
tonight im seeking someone who'll provide the human spark