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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Nov 2011
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Mike, this was one of the best songs I've heard here at JPF, I haven't been around too long. The melody, lyrics, music,vocals, and arrangement were all very good. The only small nit-pic grammar-wise might be the line where you wrote "somthing's changed" maybe should read "some things changed" - but maybe you were doing that on purpose to give that a "spin" rather than remaining literal to the meaning. I like the "whistle solo" for a commercial TV or move soundtrack, but would rather hear a more conventional solo there as I think a strong instumental solo there would be an asset to the song. This upbeat song by the way with its catchy melody would make a good music theme for a TV show by the way-you might want to pitch it that direction. Nice job, congrats! steady-eddie.
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