Originally Posted by Mackie H.
NELSON--

YOU'RE SOUNDING GREAT IN THIS ONE--JUST MY THOUGHTS: MAYBE A LITTLE FASTER TEMPO, JUST A TAD--AN OPTION WOULD BE TO MAKE THE LAST PART OF THE VERSES INTO A BR1 AND BR2 (SHORTER VERSES WITH BR) AND LEAVE THE ICEY VOCAL CALCULATED BRITTLE AND COLD IN THE BR 1 AND BR2--JUST THINKING OUT LOUD--I LIKE THE IDEA BEHIND FROZEN IN TIME!

WRITE ON BRO'--LOVE YOUR SONGS--

Mackie

Brother Mackie
Thanks for the listen and the suggestions.