Tom,
I enjoyed this. Tweaks below, keep or sweep smile

When Place the world we know is to at blame
I’m not crying, I’m only praying
For the world to feel understand my pain…

I fell lost my heart for to love and a face
But oceans of time have washed all that away
And has put delivered us in to this place






“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!