Phillip and Glyn,
Great hook!
Suggestions comments below, keep or sweep smile

making up was worth the battle

will our love survive or crumble(I'd like a closer rhyme)


everythings out in the open

now a drink's my true passion(rhyme mate should be closer)


The up's and Down's
are turning my life inside out
my favorite drink used to be
sweet iced tea no doubt (tag-on for rhyme sake--"if it can be be deleted, then it's not needed")





“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!