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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Hi Colin, It sounds very good. My only thought and Zeek has already mentioned it is that the chorus starts off great but then it sounds more like a verse. I think shortening would be a good idea or like Neil said throw some more (Picking up speed)s in there. I forgot that it was the chorus untill that last picking up speed. Other than that it sounds great!  Dottie
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