sowhat,

OK, the good news. You have good rhythm and meter, in other words your timing for the song is good. You also have a pleasant sound to your voice. Where you could use work is with key. At least on this song. I suspect it's not in a good key for you, because instead of singing the lead melody, you're singing a pretty good harmony by the end of the song. First you need to get some ear training for a firm grasp on key. Here's a piano do re mi vocal warm up you can sing along to. Just sing la la la along with the piano notes. This will start to get you a good feel for being in key (key and scale are basically, practically the same thing).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GTcwRFMQC1s

And, while you're singing it, you're warming your voice up...hey...multi tasking...very early 2K, n'est pas?

Get 'er done.

Mike

You've got to know your limitations. I don't know what your limitations are. I found out what mine were when I was twelve. I found out that there weren't too many limitations, if I did it my way. -Johnny Cash

It's only music.
-niteshift

Mike Dunbar Music