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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jan 2009
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Hello Michael. Actually Lisa had it right IMO. The set up isn't exactly clear in the opening and begs to question, "Who is the singer speaking to?" The "why" is answered BUT we are still left confused. The fact that you felt the need to support it and explain it indicates that even you are not sure.  A rule of thumb and one I use often is, "That like a joke if you have to explain it then it doesn't work." The same applies to lyrics/songs. You do not get the opportunity to explain yourself. "We" the listerner and here reader must see it for itself. Food for thought. Great idea though.  Douglas
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