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hi, over all the song seems well written, arranged, etc. the vocal seems to get drowned out at times and if not for the lyrics being there to read i would not be able to understand what you are singing. i realize this is a demo but as the lyrics are well written they should not be hidden under the music but stand above it so they can be appreciated. other than that pretty cool song, hook, music vibe.
dmk
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