Hi Linda,

This is very cool, you got out there and you did it!! Good for you! I don’t sing so I can’t comment as to what you should or should not do, but I do like the song! Looking at the lyric I have one suggestion for you, kos of course!

2. When I stumble
On these stones that turn my feet (These stones that turn my feet doesn’t make sense to me, perhaps “beneath my feet”?)
When I fall and fail,
You carry me

Other than that it looks very good!! I enjoyed the performance, congrats on your first time!!

Dottie