Thanks for sharing your experiences with us -- it was a very interesting read (and I re-listened to the songs while I was going along).

Now it was interesting what he said about demo #1 -- just have fewer instruments. I think this was because a) he didn't feel the musicians "connected" to the tune and b) this was a "critique" and not a pitch.
It's funny, demo #1 "sounded" the best, but yea the story is a common theme.

I would have been happy with the critiques on songs "Jackson Kelly" and "Where The Devil Lurked"

Kevin

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