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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Stevie,
Let me say that I really like this one a lot. It reminds me of a Traveling Wilbury song called "Last NIght." The groove is really great and moves the song along well and made me listen twice. I love the melody of the chorus a lot too and the lyrics are cute (if that is an ok word?) If you are looking for suggestions, I would suggest compacting it a bit by cutting back on some words and lines so the listener can hang onto some of your phrases and then hit the chorus. I think it has potential to be a killer song! Really great Stevie! This is one of my favorites of yours.
Tracy Thanks Tracy. I appreciate the listen and kudos. I know it's a bit wordy but especially on the chorus I wanted the syncopation to go along with the percussion (tamborine). Stevie
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