I'm kinda new here at JPF so I am enjoying the lyrics section because it all starts with a great write (and I do a lot of melody for folks). I think we all "see" pieces in different perspectives and that's alright. I also believe we all have our own internal metre goin on and when you see a piece that you can "dance" with, it's really very, very nice, just like this work is for me. This piece fits my afformentioned metre well !! You certainly have a wonderful penchant for saying so much with so few words. I would love to see a chorus of some kind but that would not be difficult. Just really like this !!