I loooooove coffee songs. I agree with Andy. You do have a good voice.

Apparently lots of people ate coffee soup. Usually milk or cream is involved too. It's like dipping donuts into coffee.

A suggestion for you:

"some ancient mix he'd handed down,"

Perhaps it could read " some ancient mix __ handed down."

You could hold out the mix a little longer when you sing it to make up for the lost beat of "he'd"

Interesting song. For those familiar with coffee soup, it is a bit of light hearted nostalgia. It's not a knee-slapper but it's cute. Coffee lovers would be attracted to this song and, who knows, maybe there will be a cooking show that wants to feature a coffee soup recipe or depression era recipes and may want a song to go along with it.

I liked how you had Grandma weeping as she cleaned his bowl. It gives us a glimpse into their relationship, obviously one that was loving. (Either that or she hated cleaning the bowl, lol.)

Very enjoyable.


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