Caroline,

Very pretty song, the singer is very good and sings it well.

That bridge doesn't seem right, the first line almost seems to be cut short, I think it cuts the singer off from finishing that line off and the pauses for me come off as hesitant. I'm sorry, it seemed like something was missing and I can tell when a singer isn't fluent through it that the melody and words aren't dancing as they should.

That is just my opinion, it is a beautiful song.

Tammy


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