There are things I could pick apart in every write i've ever seen...including my own. This is Kim's first post, and my review was very glowing, I suppose, but I truly enjoyed listening. I also happen to be a huge Dire Straits fan. Most of their stuff doesn't follow what you might call traditional formatting, but it's great to "get into," like Pink Floyd. I wanted Kim to understand that aside from harsh critiquing, he is amongst friends. I can rip him a new one later (kidding...sorta).

And Marc--my ears are as wide open as humanly possible. I'm a sponge nowadays. I've already started applying things I've learned from both you and cherrycherry (in private conversations). I'm going to be an even better writer tomorrow--and I blame people like you.

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