Jim and Stan...

Super job from both of you! Man, this was a hoot! Loved it.

I agree with Mike about the precision and full-bodied presentation of your notes in the upper reigster. Like I told you on the last one...you have a set of pipes!

Comments on the the song: The lyric is stellar. Stan has a way with those off the wall subjects like nobody else. Couldn't find a word I would change. Great job, Stan! The vocals is fabulous. You already know how I admire and respect your vocal abilitites, Jim. I think if you cut back just a very slight amount on the echo/slap-back on the vocal, it would help. But, as I said, just the very slightest amount. But, since this is a preliminary work tape, I assume you wull eventually tidy a few things up along the way. Until you do that, perhaps my comment on that is premature. Also, genre-wise, I'd go with Ska Reggae rather than Pop.

This was a ton of fun!

Alan