Hi David, at the very beginning, the way it starts it almost sounded like a cd skipping, I know it is the way you started it but I would suggest making a better entry part into it then start the major drums..and the cymbols are a bit too loud, but otherwise the rest of it was very enjoyable.

You are very talented.

Kim


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