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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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My eyelids, shade my future
Unnatural bracelets born from my sin.
The listener will need more clues about the bracelet because it follows the eyelid thing with nothing to separate the images. They won't know it's a list of images. If you want the listener to get it you may want to identify it more clearly.
for instance:
My eyelids, shade my future,
beholding the bracelets born from my sin.
My eyelids, shade my future,
can't see crimson bracelets born from my sin
Bloody bracelets new born from my sin.
bloodied bracelets birthmarks of sin.
My eyelids, shade my future,
can't see the red bracelets born from my sin.
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