Hi Mike

Kristi and I would appreciate your feedback on our song "The Heart of a Storm" as to improving it Melodically, etc. This song will be one of the songs in which will go on my first Album, so we need all the advice we can get, before I do that in a couple of months time, with a Record Label, here in Australia.

Don't be too hard on my vocal hah, I'm on my learners with singing. crazy Nah, bring it on, I can take good criticism, other wise I would never learn, hey. grin


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The Heart of a Storm
©2008/2009 Michele Bolton/Paul Nunns/Kristi McKeever

His eyes locked with hers when she asked for his order
Her blood reached her cheeks when he leaned in toward her
A smile as big as the eyes on her face
Was all that was needed to make his heart race

All of a sudden he’s sitting up in his seat
Thinking of ways to keep her talking sweet
It shouldn’t be hard to get what he’s after
Cuz she doesn’t know she flirts with disaster

(ch)
He’s got the heart of a storm
Wicked love for a thrill
Holds fire in his hands
Leaves the girls with the chills
Comes in out of the blue
With charisma and style
Stays barely a moment
Leaving damage for miles
He’s got the heart of a storm


He tells her he’s just a regular guy
Who works real hard and takes life in stride
With every request he gets a bit closer
She starts to melt as he wins her over

(ch)
He’s got the heart of a storm
Wicked love for a thrill
Holds fire in his hands
Leaves the girls with the chills
Comes in out of the blue
With charisma and style
Stays barely a moment
Leaving damage for miles
He’s got the heart of a storm

(br)
He’s bold and out of control
Leaves you out in the cold
She’ll be the one to set him straight
Take control before it’s too late

(ch)
He’s got the heart of a storm
Wicked love for a thrill
Holds fire in his hands
Leaves the girls with the chills
Comes in out of the blue
With charisma and style
Stays barely a moment
Leaving damage for miles
He’s got the heart of a storm



Thanks & big hugs

Michele & Kristi

Last edited by Michele Bolton; 06/07/09 02:46 AM.