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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Joined: Dec 2007
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Hi Mike Kristi and I would appreciate your feedback on our song "The Heart of a Storm" as to improving it Melodically, etc. This song will be one of the songs in which will go on my first Album, so we need all the advice we can get, before I do that in a couple of months time, with a Record Label, here in Australia. Don't be too hard on my vocal hah, I'm on my learners with singing.  Nah, bring it on, I can take good criticism, other wise I would never learn, hey. http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7557523The Heart of a Storm ©2008/2009 Michele Bolton/Paul Nunns/Kristi McKeever His eyes locked with hers when she asked for his order Her blood reached her cheeks when he leaned in toward her A smile as big as the eyes on her face Was all that was needed to make his heart race All of a sudden he’s sitting up in his seat Thinking of ways to keep her talking sweet It shouldn’t be hard to get what he’s after Cuz she doesn’t know she flirts with disaster (ch) He’s got the heart of a storm Wicked love for a thrill Holds fire in his hands Leaves the girls with the chills Comes in out of the blue With charisma and style Stays barely a moment Leaving damage for miles He’s got the heart of a storm He tells her he’s just a regular guy Who works real hard and takes life in stride With every request he gets a bit closer She starts to melt as he wins her over (ch) He’s got the heart of a storm Wicked love for a thrill Holds fire in his hands Leaves the girls with the chills Comes in out of the blue With charisma and style Stays barely a moment Leaving damage for miles He’s got the heart of a storm (br) He’s bold and out of control Leaves you out in the cold She’ll be the one to set him straight Take control before it’s too late (ch) He’s got the heart of a storm Wicked love for a thrill Holds fire in his hands Leaves the girls with the chills Comes in out of the blue With charisma and style Stays barely a moment Leaving damage for miles He’s got the heart of a storm Thanks & big hugs Michele & Kristi
Last edited by Michele Bolton; 06/07/09 02:46 AM.
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