What you are really writing about is people who have two faces - a public face which is represented here by a Christian but could just as well be a businessman, a mayor, a schoolteacher, etc., and a private face which is the alcoholic, child fancier, druggie, etc. etc.

Having said that, I am not sure who wants to hear a song about the negative stuff you read about in the paper and see on TV way too often.

The lyric is inconsistent in its rhyme scheme. The prosody or rhythm/meter does not seem to fit a normal song structure....perhaps you have got a rhythm going on in your head that we can't hear!

I agree that front row is much more singer friendly.

Hope this helps.

Colin

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