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Hi Jean,

I have two already written that meet your criteria. Here's one w/music that was a cowrite w/Kaley and the word "sins" is in the last verse:

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“Gethsemane”
(c)2007 Kaley Willow
(c)2008 Lynn Orloff/Kaley Willow

A garden long ago
Bathed in a moonlit glow
A peaceful place where silence would be broken
Jesus fell on His knees
God heard the prayer He breathed
My Father will you take this cup away from me

It was His time to die
And as the hour drew nigh
His fervent prayers continued without ceasing
Though there was watch to keep
Disciples fell asleep
The fate of all humanity just hours away

Bridge:
Gethsemane, the garden echoes
Echoes each plea, Gethsemane
The weight of mankind's sin
Came crushing down on Him
Garden of prayer, Gethsemane, Gethsemane

The soldiers came with swords
A kiss betrayed the Lord
But Jesus struggled not as He was led away
He saw past Calvary
He saw eternity
He'd give His life to take my sins and set me free
He'd give His life to show how deep a love can be
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Here's another lyric recently written with the word "sin" in the last verse from one of your previous challenges.

“It’d Be A Shame”
©2009 Lynn Orloff

It’d be a shame to waste a moment when it’s such a perfect day
We could stroll through fields of flowers and I would pick you a bouquet
It’d be a shame if we don’t rearrange our schedule just for this
Just think of all we’d miss

It’d be a shame to miss the ocean hear the waves pound on the shore
We could run and feed the seagulls laugh when they would beg for more
It’d be a tragedy of sorts to shun this kind of bliss
Just think of all we’d miss

Bridge:
Oh what a shame if we dismiss, an opportunity like this
When Mother Nature’s painted such a scene
I’m making you an offer that I hope you won’t refuse
Who knows where all this playfulness will lead…

It’d be a shame to miss the stars tonight, let’s take a little walk
I’d love to watch the moonlight kiss your shoulders while we talk
To not take all this magic in, would surely be our biggest sin
So darling may I ask you one more time
For it would be a shame to pass it by