GIRLS RULE!!! [Linked Image]

This is great Dano, with just a hint of "Maneater". I think your chorus is killer with the internal rhymes. Your second verse is just as good, if not better than your first, which is a huge deal if you ask me.

And since it's written in third person, it doesn't matter how unlikeable this minx is. I have to say this is, IMO, one of your very best lyrics to date! Really great job!!

[Linked Image] Tink


The Artist formerly known as TINK ;\)

I write so I can breathe...

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