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by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Hey, Lynn - So sweet of you to take the time to post the "Fame" lyric. Look at all those "Remembers!" That repeated background part was the suggestion of one of our back-up singers on the session, a young singer/songwriter named Luther Vandross.
There are two slight corrections I would make to your post: Verse 1, part B, the word 'hand' is singular: "I can catch the moon in my hand." It makes for a smoother near-rhyme with 'am.'
And in Verse 2, part B, the line should read: "I can ride your heart til it breaks."
Again, thanks for your diligence and interest!
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