This thread has made me realize something, that JPF - great site that it is - is not right for me and I'm not right for it. It's a site for people wanting to write commercial songs - and ideally people of a good God fearing persuasion! Not that there's anything wrong with that, but I've realized that I personally am an artist before anything and will never be able to compromise that for anything. So I give reviews from an artistic viewpoint not a commercial one, but the commercial viability of a song is what most people are aiming for here, so apologies if I trashed any songs here from an artistic viewpoint when it was a perfectly good song from a commercial view.

But this site has been very helpful to me and I've learnt a lot here, especially from Big Jim, who has offered lots of good advice.

Never Give Up!

Lucian.

PS. Moker, I was messing around with that Zion song you posted and I half finished this song, probably called Bridge of Sighs, and if I ever do my album or whatever, you will be credited as a co-writer - you never know it could be that big hit! Be well.