Hi Tom

Just a couple of tips to try and help. It is better to NOT use FX when recording as it is easier to record dry and add the FX later. FX added whilst recording cannot be removed, adjusted or edited post record.

Singers should always sing directly into the mic otherwise levels will be very poor and distorted, background noise and too high record levels will affect the performance. Always use a good quality mic. Experiment with different types makes and models to see which is best for the particular voice. A good mic will last a very long time if looked after so it is important to buy the best available for your budget and application. It is important to find the optimum distance to sing from. Use a windshield to prevent CAPTURING breathing noises and POPS etc.

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