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Ali Angel
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/27/26 11:00 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Howdy Bree,
My first thought was Martina too.
I agree about switching the verses but I see you're already considering that.
There's one more thing you might look at.... the lines about her raising two BOYS alone etc...and wanting "to see her BOYS grow up and maybe find someone who cares".
To me, if you changed it to "her DAUGHTERS" it'd be more like she was reflecting on her own situation.
Thisun's a keeper young lady.
JBW
Last edited by James B.Williamson; 03/10/08 07:43 PM.
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