Hi Mark,

Congrats. It's great to have a #1 anywhere. I've been on soundclick a while now without a #1, so I know it ain't easy. I think you could do the song about 10 BPM slower and get more out of it. I do like the way it's done, but the lyric feels a bit rushed at times. Just my thoughts, keep 'em or can 'em.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
A day without learning is a day lost forever.

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