Originally Posted by Ben F Burton lll
IM,

I appreciate the overall tone of this, but am having trouble with the "whispers of ice" as well as it melting down his back. Jerks me out of the intended mood (appreciation of nature).

Maybe it's just the global warming...34 degrees in Bama tonight! smile
(AND November is 5 degrees below average...)


Hello Ben,

I'm referring to snow flakes in this piece. They're so soft and gentle, as though they're cold whispers. Once they fall they melt. It is meant to be an appreciation of nature. I never intended to imply that the snow was unpleasant. I just love how the snow awakens the senses.

Thank you both for reading. smile


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