Hey, Steve.
Sorry I'm late to the party. Been out a few days (I hate it when life gets in the way).

I like the song. It's a good study in human insecurities and paranoia. Since you know my roots and sensibilities, you'll understand that I saw it from a country perspective, and contrary to some it worked for me.

No the chorus isn't too long. (Okay...JMO)

I'd have to agree with Lynn about the shower scene, and given what I know about what goes in in parks (trust me. this is an area in which I am intimately familar), it seems he's not only accusing her of being unfaithful, but of being someone that is on the look-out for Vice Cops.

Is he angry because she wants to maintain her girlish figure and so be attractive to other men, or just because she goes out without him?

I would have to agree that some resolution would be in order, whether he chooses to run with her or if he lets her run alone. If she runs alone, does she come back? Does he let her go again?

Just a little food for thought. If you're not hungry, I'll understand.

Look to tomorrow, my friend. Have you converted to counting down in hours yet?

If music be the food of love, why is it so hard to keep my family fed?

Pete
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