The base concept of the piece is good an even though I haven't heard your music yet I think I understand where you are coming from for the CD cover. However when ever you have something dark and it involves a person where the eyes are focused on promotes a lot of mood to it. So if it is dark and he looks like he is looking directly into your eyes well I could see how that would be a little intimidating but lets say he was looking down and off to the left it would give a more brooding feel which may be better. On a side note it is a bit of a rough drawing and could use a more professional touch. Art is a big selling point even when it comes to selling music so it has to catch the buyer's eye.

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