Hi Rittman:

An interesting story told well with few words....

What kind of music do you hear for this? I'm kinda picturing a guy at a piano bar.....

"we never fail to make mention
of how at last years event
the trail, trail of the scent"

Not sure how well this will transition into the chorus - seems to be leaving a thought hanging. Might work with the right delivery and music....

Cool idea....nice writing...

Scott