Dear Heidi,

First off, thanks for playing....

Secondly, Romance is in the air!! Very bittersweet, but nicely written and evocative of the singer's time in France. I especially liked the line the Mona Lisa, and the pay-off couplet of:

I made you smile like that once
but, then my artist's brush wore thin.

My only question is the use of the word "revisit" in your chorus. And almost sounds too clinical... Maybe something like:

Can we find that place again
when lovers shared romance,
and get back what we once held so dear
in those days in Paris, France?

I'm also not sure you need the "so" in the third line.

As yall say, keep or sweep. Loved it otherwise...never having BEEN to France, I'm just going to have to keep taking everyones' word for it that is tres romantique!!

Cheers,
Beth


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