Louis that was a very pretty song. Could be a very simple wedding song also. I love the melody in the chorus but wanted the last words of each line to go higher although I harmonized it high as you sang it low and it sounded real good. I think the addition of a bridge would be a plus also. Something like:

Possible Bridge:
We never know what may come our way,
Sunshine skies or clouds of gray,
However good or bad things get,
Darling you need not forget...

For richer or poorer, etc. etc.

The bridge would give it more length since the verses are so short and add alittle contrast. Very pretty Louis. I had never heard that one of yours before.

Sorry this isn't a critique thread but I couldn't resist.

Best,
Lynn

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