Robert... Hey..I like the lyrics for the most part...additions to the song, maybe violins or some backing would help...I did notice a little stiffness in the vocal...but heck in 20 minutes that ain't no problem that can't be fixed...I still hear Gordon Lightfoot in your voice...the only real part that kinda bothered me was the Winter's calling lines...I don't know if was the chords there or what...not sure....maybe the way you did that part vocally...hope these comments are helpful...t-bob