Hey KK,
The bridge has been shot down, (several times) , so it's gone.
The focus was supposed to be on the river and/or the mist. The verses are just happenings along it's course, but that didn't come across too well. A re write is in order. Actually if/when I get it done, there'll be two songs. One focusing on the mist and one on the river. then Alan just suggested that there was plenty of material--leads , for a whole CD, Whattaya' (or anyone) think if that idea? You can E me either. Wish I could draft that Irish person to help me on a whole CD, but fat chance of that. Nevertheless I will toss the idea to her.
Yeah on New Year., s'pose I'll have to do it but not looking forward to it
Thanks for the suggestions. I'll print them all off before long so I casn keep all the ideas accessible
Wy