Hi Nashvillecat,

Wow. Great song and great evaluation.

I do understand the little pitchers ears. They don't hear the sweet song for long because of the broken radio. Sad.

The line I think is weakest (yet stronger than most writers ever achieve [Linked Image] ) is
And eased his mind in the hours that he chose
It works, says what it needs to, but I am thinking
He dressed his mind in the colors that he chose
While the kids ran round wearin' other people's clothes.

I, grin, am not familiar with John Prine, but you have convinced me to look him up.

Thanks,
Vondelle

Hey, Nashvillecat, you would like Mike Naydock's lyric What a Difference a Year Makes. He has a good start and great creativity. He just needs to focus it. His lyric is over on Lyric Forum 1 if you want to check it out. I don't think we give sufficient credit on these boards for creativity.

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Vondelle Hebert

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