Great start Robert.
Make it a head job. Give it a bit more fun lines. Get Bill Scull to do a "get 'em dancing" job on it and it has a chance of making the play list of www.kevfm.com is my guess.
Just hope you don't get the flack poor old Stan got for his Protein one is all.
Shoulda put an R on it maybe.
I was really expecting this to be somethning to do with hitch hiking.
Thought you were doing a bring 'em in then surprixe them thing.
Which would work well too.
Graham

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