WOW!!! You have pretty intense dreams, Johnjohn... whatever happened to showing up in class nekkid? [Linked Image] For some reason, I always dream I'm going into a restaurant, church or other public place without shoes on. Can't quite figure it out, but it's very disturbing at the time. Weird.

At first I read this as someone "giving up", instead of "giving it up", which makes a HUGE difference. If I'd only paid more attention and caught the "it", it wouldn't have confused me. But I went back and read it again and caught on.

And this is one of the COOLEST couplets I've ever read:

my dream ‘d left an artifact
to haunt me like a ghost

WOW, what beauty!!

Not sure I understood 100% of this, but that's what would bring me back to listen again and again. Nice job!
BSH
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