Good start on this one, Bill! I can relate to the message -- and no matter what anybody says -- there are plenty of hours in the day -- just too many darn things we have to do / THINK we have to do, or want to do, to try to cram into those 24 hours! Anyway, I noticed meter bumps, but you already said you will be working on them. There are a few adjectives that could be dropped that would smooth some of those bumps ("get the kids ALL off to school" - dropping all won't hurt it; "LITTLE Amy's shoe" - can drop "little" -- just those kinds of things). Anyway, just my thoughts -- good luck with it! [Linked Image]

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Mary Lou