Well I got four versions of this looping now and it confirms my suspissions formed when I first read this.
It sang itself.
When I first sat down at keyboard with tjhsi one, found a beat I fancied, decided it was a minor and went for it, it just went off.
Sang it. Listened a few times, tried a few differant beats and flattened then B chord. and sang it again.
Liked that better so transposed to a key that suited me better and did it again.
Listening to Chris' nice one. I still hear the influence of my melody there, so as I said this sang itself and I would be surprised if any composer, in any genre would have come up with a melody much differant that this nice one.
Least I had a go. And got the melody close to how it finished up.
Just having a go at a Bob Young thing was inspiratioj enough for me. Sob.
Do have to admit, I would listen to the swing version more myself but that is just my personal likes in mysic.
Toward Production, which I only mention in a demo listen because Chris is public performance standard.
Chris. Remember way back, I mentioned your H sounds being wanting.
It comes up in here in one of your hows.
I would be thinking "Breathe from the gut on the H sounds" a little more to get rid of that trendance.
Good job Guys. Sob.
Now i got another empty tune to find words for.
There is always a bright side.
Thanks for the chance to have a go Bob.
Regards
Graham (smiling through the tears) Henderson

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