Hey Bill:

This song is like a box of chocolates - its keeping me guessing.

I like it a lot. In particular, the third verse is killer!

I DO get a weird vibe from it though. I can't figure out whether it should be sung in a deep, meaningful manner or a light, easy manner. Right now, it seems to be straddling both...

My gut tells me the light approach is the way to go. Just one opinion.....

I think the lyric is great. Only one line I'm not sure about: "til it smacks you between the eyes". It sounds fine but you kinda jump out of the chocolate box metaphor at that point - (unless you buy your chocolates at Spencers' Gifts [Linked Image])

Anyway, I think you are on to something cool here....

Scott


[This message has been edited by scott59 (edited 09-26-2006).]