Jean,... I feel Critiques are important...because..so many times, it's a small detail....or maybe...A LARGE ONE [Linked Image]..
we overlook.. Many times.., we overlook them when we're writing..because..we've nurtured..this song..
from a "baby" up....and we become attached and can't always see the obvious...

Something I think helps is, ..to step back from the song for awhile....and then review
the constructive comments offered with fresh eyes.

best wishes,
Kaley [Linked Image]

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