Cue,
Very good & entertaining. Not much to nit.....

this flows better to me
But I wouldn’t trade a bucket full of Mississippi Mud
For a hundred acre CONCRETE FIELD IN DOWNTOWN LA.

And tell Him when He calls me Home I want to shake His hand(SEEMS ALMOST A LITTLE INCONSEQUENTIAL THE WAY THIS IS PHRASED imo)

VERY DISCOURAGING!!! TEN years! Strikes me as plenty good enuff to have been raidoed by now.
Bridge? Lord NO!!!

The biggest problem is length. Even though all of your images entertain, you could dispense with a few verses/choruses without losing the point, and streamline it for airplay!
Ben F