Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Its a pretty melody, and a great hook, its just dull in the story. Its a nice track.

The other thing i noticed is the vocal even original seems to be ai, sounds alot like the second version in suno..

Thanks, Dom, for the feedback. “Dull” is probably pretty spot-on. Songwriting is something I learned over time, and this was one of the first songs I ever wrote. 😊

The vocal on the original is actually my real voice, recorded back in the ’80s with a really cheap microphone. I was using Cakewalk back then, and it had some pretty cool vocal filters that I used to create those backing vocals too. They were kind of a trademark of mine at the time.

The reason the AI version sounds so similar is that I used a Persona based on my real voice. Sometimes it comes surprisingly close to the original — just with a much better-sounding voice. 😂