Dom,
You're entitled to your opinion of the song. If you think the lyrics, vocals, production, or mix are bad, that's your right.

What I find interesting is that you're criticizing a song that I wrote, arranged, performed, recorded, mixed, and produced myself.

Your work has generally been presented differently. All you do is write lyrics. You use AI-generated melodies, music, vocals and arrangements to bring them to life. There's nothing wrong with that, but it's a very different process from writing and producing every aspect of a song yourself.

So while I respect your right to have an opinion, for this song I'm more interested in hearing production, performance, and recording critiques from people who have actually done those things themselves.